Pre-student teaching poses unique challenges, as I struggle
to assume a more prominent teacher role while also devoting a substantial
amount of time to my content area coursework.
More than ever before, I feel a twinge of discomfort when transitioning
from my exhilarating post as co-teacher in my mentor teacher’s classroom to my
old familiar role of student in my literature classes at the university. Sure, I obviously love literature analysis,
and sure, I obviously love to write, but lately an impatience has welled up
inside of me, and I find myself longing to set aside Shakespeare and Ethnic
literature for now, and jump headlong into teaching.
One of my English classes, however, marries my two roles in
a unique way: Theory and Practice in Composition. Here, Dr. Koupf addresses her students as
authorities, as we read and discuss theories pertaining to writing
pedagogy. While the articles we read are
inevitably compelling in their positions, and while my professor is
frighteningly intelligent, she recognizes that she has never taught at the
middle or secondary levels, and so turns to us for suggestions regarding the
practical applications of these educational theories. This dynamic empowers everyone in the room,
recognizing each individual as both a teacher and a learner.
Our class recently read and discussed an excerpt from Paulo
Freire’s book Pedagogy of the Oppressed. This famous chapter, entitled “The ‘Banking’
Concept of Education”, presents two opposing classroom philosophies: the
banking concept of education, and the problem-posing concept of education. The banking concept consists of the teacher
“depositing” information into the student, who is largely viewed as a
receptacle rather than as an active participant in the learning process. In contrast,
the problem-posing concept levels the dynamic between teacher and student. Rather than an authoritarian, oppressive
figure, the teacher here acts as a learning facilitator whose primary concern
is the development of an individual student’s personal perspective and of their
meaningful, contextual understandings (Freire 245). While Freire arguably over-simplifies an
organic and true-to-life classroom experience by reducing it into two,
supposedly mutually exclusive binary approaches, his underpinning sentiment has
haunted me since I’ve read the piece.
"Boooooooooo!" (he seemed to say)
For example: at my mentor teacher’s request, I lead my class
the other day in a sentence diagramming lesson.
After I verbally quizzed the students about what they remembered from
our previous diagramming exercises and built on to the diagram with adjectives,
Freire poked his little head into my brain, and said, “Mary, your transaction
is complete. Your account balance is:
subjects, predicates, articles, and adjectives.
Do you need a receipt?” Ugh. These poor freshmen have just passively
absorbed by grammar lesson, and to what end?
Do they even understand the reasoning behind sentence diagramming? What Freire really wants me to ask them is, “Is
this meaningful to you?” It takes a
brave teacher to ask that sort of question.
Later that day, I reflected on my surge of guilt and on
possible adjustments I could have made to my lesson to create a more problem-posing
classroom atmosphere. Even in situations
where students must be fed information, I need to remember to engage in some amount
of dialog with them about their perception of such information, about the
context within which they view it, about the usefulness of that information to
them and to others, and, in turn, their judgment of its relative worth. If I teach a class full of students how to
diagram a sentence, and I deliver that information inside of a vacuum, the
exercise proves meaningless (unless, of course, they grow up to become
professional sentence diagrammers).
Perhaps through osmosis they will vaguely and subconsciously glean some
greater application, but is this backdoor approach more efficient than one that
remains transparent, or, better yet, that encourages the students to reason out
the merits of the exercise for themselves?
These concepts and questions have piqued my interest in a
way that is motivating some pre-student teacher research on my part. I hope to test my hypothesis, that by increasing
two-way intellectual conversation within the classroom, and by empowering my
students as Dr. Koupf empowers me, I can increase my students’ motivation to
learn, and increase the depth of their understanding of classroom
material. In each lesson, in each
moment, this communication and empowerment will look different, and in some
instances I may find that either by force of habit or due to the nature of the
lesson, I return to a banking method mentality; however, as I’ve stated before,
I must abandon notions of perfection and instead solely place my focus on
becoming a better teacher. Let the
experiment begin.
Works Cited
Freire, Paulo. "The 'Banking' Concept of Education." Ways of Reading: An Anthology for Writers. 8th ed. Ed. David Bartholomae and Anthony Petrosky. New York: Bedford/St. Martin's, 2008. 242-257. Print.

This post was of great interest to me because 1) I absolutely adored English 680 with Dr. Koupf and 2) I also thought the Freire article was extremely interesting. I’ll never forget how I felt when I read that article and realized how backwards American education can sometimes seem. However, while part of me dreams of a world where Freire’s style of classroom is the solution to lack of student interest and performance, I think I know that this is a very idealistic situation. There are certain aspects of education that are unfortunately almost always going to be transmitted to students via the “deposit” approach. You were very right in saying that every learning situation will require a unique teaching approach, not excluding lecture style of teaching. However, I think a good goal for monitoring effective teaching approaches would be to strive for balance. Balance is important in so many aspects of life, as well as within the professional world. It’s important that we as teachers don’t always gravitate to the style of teaching that makes us most comfortable or that the kids most enjoy. Let’s face it, if we did what the typical student enjoys all of the time there probably wouldn’t be a lot of learning going on. Also, as teachers I believe one of our main jobs is to expose student to as much as possible. Instead of focusing on making sure that students are gaining and learning something from every single second of every single lesson, maybe we should divert our focus to exposure and ensuring that students are receiving a balanced and well-informed world view as well as curriculum. I’ve recently had to switch to this way of thinking solely because it is an undeniable fact that some of the 8th grade students I observe are simply not ready to comprehend some of the text that we are reading. At first I had the thought that maybe we should give them a book that is less difficult. However, I instantly nixed this idea because I began to see that if they weren’t to get exposed to this material now…they probably wouldn’t ever get exposed to it again. If we can simply plant the seeds in our students’ minds (sometimes by depositing and sometimes by letting them explore and wonder) and accept that the seeds may not blossom until much further down the line, I think that we will be much happier and feel much more successful in our jobs.
ReplyDeleteDisclaimer***This is not to say that we shouldn’t hold students to high standards or stop assessing student learning – but instead of interpreting low assessment scores as a failure on both our end and the student’s, interpret it as a measurement of what their brain is able to process and comprehend right now; a snapshot of what they know at this moment in time.
Disclaimer (2)**** I think you’re going to do an excellent job of pushing your students and helping make the material you are teaching meaningful and engaging. DO NOT WORRY. YOU ROCK.
Thank you so much for such a thorough and thoughtful response, Michaela!
ReplyDeleteYou provided so many interesting insights that I feel I could literally spend an entire day talking to you about this. I love how your passion and inquisitiveness comes through as much in your writing as it does in person. I am particularly interested in one thing you said:
"Instead of focusing on making sure that students are gaining and learning something from every single second of every single lesson, maybe we should divert our focus to exposure and ensuring that students are receiving a balanced and well-informed world view as well as curriculum."
I like your idea of exposure, and your perspective that exposing students to material that may on its surface seem beyond their reach is in itself valuable. You seem to be implying in this statement that although students may not grasp the details of a text that we as teachers are hoping to emphasize, for instance, students can benefit from peripheral conversations regarding the text, as these conversations can probe into students' world views, and perhaps coax them to widen.
If I am understanding your statement correctly, I would add that you seem to pose it as a counter-argument to Freire's position, when in reality, I believe this sentiment is perfectly in line with Freire's philosophy. Freire reminds his reader frequently that nothing should be taught in a vacuum, but rather should be discussed in a greater context; this context should serve to further embed the learner into the world around them. If students do not necessarily understand the color symbolism in the Great Gatsby, but more deeply understand the notion that equating wealth and happiness is fallacious, the lesson is a success.
Ms. Harrison, thank you for illustrating so aptly how you've internalized Freire's argument and applied it to your reflections on your own teaching, as well as your assessment of others' teaching. Your post and subsequent dialogue with Ms. Liebst are an absolute pleasure to read and learn from, and I would imagine that your ENGL 680 professor would also enjoy reading this. Would it be okay if I shared the link to your post with her?
ReplyDeleteToo late ... I already sent the link to Dr. K. Your post and the dialogue it generated are just too good not to share.
ReplyDeleteAlthough you weren't pleased with your initial lesson on sentence diagramming, you've used your research to envision ways to reteach your lesson in a way that might better engage students. Bravo! When you learn and adapt your teaching, your students learn as well. Keep up with your experimenting.
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